Sunday, 18 August 2013

Tiny Miscalculation (Trifextra: Week Eighty-One)

“You are like spring, most cherished of all the four seasons “.
“Actually, where I come from, there are five, I assume you have missed monsoon”.
 “…..”.

“She’s way out of your league man”.

10 comments:

  1. This is a funny take on the prompt. I'll have to remember that one the next time someone tries a similar corny pick-up line!
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  2. Very nice creation of a story with only 33 words. It's difficult to do well but you've done it.

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  3. This is great! Very fun, and clever 33 words!

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  4. Ha... no monsoon in Norway...

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    1. In India it's a big affair ,thanks for reading :)

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