Tuesday, 7 May 2013

she dreamt of him

This weeks Trifecta Challenge ( Week Seventy-Six ) .
BLOOD (noun)

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(1) : the fluid that circulates in the heart, arteries, capillaries, and veins of a vertebrate animal carrying nourishment and oxygen to and bringing away waste products from all parts of the body (2) : a comparable fluid of an invertebrate
b : a fluid resembling blood
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: the shedding of blood; also : the taking of life
  • Your response must be between 33 and 333 words. 
  • You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post. 
  • The word itself needs to be included in your response. 
  • You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above. 

Here I go ...

SHE DREAMT OF HIM .

She dreamt of him,
Her nightmare, her knight,
Hard to separate,
Cursed he was,
Lust and thirst in his veins .

Yet, cursed she was,
She dreamt of him,
Good days, he shower her with flowers,
Hold her like porcelain,
Bad days, would crash her,
Inflict wounds on her soul .

Broken and twisted,
Driven insane with his needs,
Forsaking her loyalty,
Still helpless like a child,
Addicted to legacy of his blood,
Begging for her grace .

Each time she would pick up,
Those shattered pieces in vain,
Hoping it was for last,
Still it vanished at dawn,
Forgotten like an insignificant dream,
Was she to blame,
Cause she dreamt of him?




14 comments:

  1. What wonderful poetry of longing and I guess violence. I think he might be bad for her though...

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    1. He is not , but she desperately hopes he will mend his ways .
      Thanks for reading Bjorn :)

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  2. I love these lines: "Addicted to legacy of his blood, Begging for her grace." Those two lines punctuate the conflict that runs throughout the piece. It's like she knows he's bad for her but can't help herself.

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    1. She wants to save him ,some people just get stuck in dilemma .
      Thanks Janna :)

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  3. "Her nightmare, her knight..."

    If only she wasn't so addicted to him!

    Beautifully written!!

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  4. I really enjoyed this but it is so sad. LM x

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    1. Thanks for reading Lyssa , hope to come up with something brighter next time :)

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  5. She needs to get away from him pronto. There are better dreams out there!

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  6. I can only hope her nightmares don't become permanent.

    Thanks for linking up!

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  7. A nice look at a destructive relationship and the inability to let go of it.
    I'd advise some practice with editing and such to polish this and in general because basically it's good, could just do with some "cleaning." :D
    Keep it up, I say as a non-poetry person that I enjoyed and appreciated this one.
    Cheers!

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    1. Thanks for reading ,I will keep that in mind ,i really appreciate key points such as above :).

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  8. What a poor excuse of a man this dream lover is-poor girl!I hope she finds a better man who can really love her for herself & not use & abuse her!Well written Ambalika:-)

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